2552/08/21

(Example)
Topic:
How to make a pizza
Background information: You need the following ingredients before Making pizza : tomatoes and other vegetables, bacon and cheese. Also you need a microwave oven, a knife for chopping and a pair of gloves.
Topic sentence: Baking a delicious pizza requires careful attention to the following states: preparing the ingredients, baking the pizza and serving it.


Fay
Topic:
How to play game Super Dance online
Background information: When you want to play the game Super Dance online, you should have a computer, internet and game disc of Super Dance online. First you should install the game program in your computer. Next you should download pact game in www.sdo.in.th and install in your computer too.
Topic sentence: To play Super Dance online, you need to carefully follow these stages: installing the game, learning the basic rules and reaching the highest level.


Alex
Topic:
How a camera works
Background information: If you want to use a camera, you need to get a camera by searching in the website or magazine, and when you buy it, you should to learn how to use a camera and know the information about your camera.
Topic sentence: Using a camera, you need to follow these stages: get a camera, learning how to use it and taking a photo.


London
Topic:
How to apply a job
Background information: You need to prepare documents, photo and portfolio. You should prepare polite dress and prepare for the interview.
Topic sentence: applying for work, you need to follow these stages: search job and apply on internet, prepare for the interview.


Pam
Topic:
How to play a sport/ swimming
Background information: You need to buy a swimsuit, goggles, life buoy, surf board, etc.
Topic sentence: Swimming in swimming pool, you need to these stages: learning how to swim, warm-up your body and trying to swim.


Iris
Topic:
How to make report
Background information: You need to following things before making the report: stationery and information.
Topic sentence: For making a report, you need to follow these stages: searching information, analyzing, mold the report, editing and finishing developing.


Stella
Topic:
How to make lasagna
Background information: Making lasagna is easy, you need to buy the ingredients: tomatoes, carrots and other vegetables, cheeses, tomato sauce and some chilly sauce and you will need the oven or microwave to cook it as well.
Topic sentence: Making lasagna for the successful, you have to be careful to follow this stages: preparing the ingredient, cooking the food according to the instruction topping and serving properly.


Stitch
Topic:
How to write Chinese characters
Background information: You need to be interested in Chinese characters.
Topic sentence: Writing Chinese characters, you need to follow these stages: know the rules, choose the character and practice writing.


Jane
Topic:
How to wash a car
Background information: You should park the car out of direct sunlight and set everything, you will need near the car.
Topic sentence: Washing a car isn’t hard if you follow these stages: washing a car, cleaning, and waxing.


Diva
Topic:
How to study for exam
Background information: You should make sure you know the topics that will be covered by the exam.
Topic sentence: If you want to get grade A in your exam, you should reading a book and reviewing it before and ask my friends if you don’t understand anything and paying attention in class.


Candy
Topic:
How to have a great time in Pattaya
Background information: You should read information about traveling and buy a travel guide.
Topic sentence: To have a great time in Pattaya you need to follow these stages: finding information, finding good accommodation and choosing activities.


Deena
Topic:
How to get BTS Onnuch Station
Background information: You should learn about the way to go to BTS Onnuch oninternet or guide book.
Topic sentence: Going to BTS Onnuch is easy if you following these stages: take the motorcycle after you know about way to go BTS after that you leave off your hour. Straight to Tesco Lotus 50 and you turn left and turn right up stairs on station.


April
Topic:
How to plan a party
Background information: When you have a party, you should decide the best time and date for your party.
Topic sentence: Toy should prepare a place, food and a name list of your friends.


Diava
Topic:
How to plant a garden
Background information: If you want to plant a garden, you need an area of land which is clear.
Topic sentence: Buy what plant does you want , and then prepare a place that you want, and prepare equipment, and time, day. To plant a beautiful garden , you need to complete these rages: buying the plants an equipment, planting the plant and decrying timecards ?


Melody
Topic:
How to play game the sims
Background information: You need the computer. You should use the game discs to installing the program
Topic sentence: Playing game the Sims, you should look after person in the sims everything such as eat every meal, take a bath, control energy each day, make cooking, go to school, time make love, when they want children, etc.

2552/08/16

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Deena
Me and my sister

Topic sentence Me and my sister are different in everything , such as body, face, or personality.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in appearance although we have same way of life but we are different.
Sub-TopicC1 I am thin while my sister is fat.
Sub-TopicC2 She likes sport, but I don’t like them.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both have similar voice.
Sub-TopicD1 She likes to socialize but I like to be alone or private time.
Sub-TopicD2 She doesn’t like to play music but I like to play music.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both friendly and talkative.


Diva
Me and old woman

Topic sentence Me and old woman are different in everything, way of life.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in appearance and body.
Sub-TopicC1 We are different in way of life, but sometime we are think in same way.
Sub-TopicC2 An old woman feel neat in contrast I feel funny.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both have similar sometime we feel lonely.
Sub-TopicD1 She loves just staying at home, but I love going out with friend.
Sub-TopicD2 She loves cooking at home but, I love eating at restaurants.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both kind and love to take care of children.


Alex
Me and a tour guide

Topic sentence I can travel in anywhere with a tour guide and introduce a new place.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in personality.
Sub-TopicC1 A tour guide likes to meet new people every day, yet I prefer to meet only my friends.
Sub-TopicC2 Unlike a tour guide who is a talkative person, I am shy.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both like to travel anywhere.
Sub-TopicD1 He is talkative, but I am shy.
Sub-TopicD2 Unlike a tour guide who likes to introduce many places, I like to learn many places by myself.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both like to learn about many places.


Stitch
Me and my father
Topic sentence
I can compare and contrasted with my father in terms of appearance, character, and ability.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in appearance.
Sub-TopicC1 My father has a dark skin; in contrast I have a light skin.
Sub-TopicC2 Whereas my father is tall, I am quite short.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both have a similar face.
Sub-TopicD1 He is talkative, but I am quite quite.
Sub-TopicD2 He likes to meet other people, while I prefer to be alone.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we like to share the experience with each other.


Stella
Me and my brother
Topic sentence
Me and my brother are different in many ways, such as, personality, appearance, hobby.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in personality.
Sub-TopicC1 Unlike my brother who is quite shy, I am more confident.
Sub-TopicC2 Further my brother is a neat person, yet I am untidy.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both like to study.
Sub-TopicD1 He has big eyes, yet I have small eyes.
Sub-TopicD2 He is very tall, but I am quite short.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both look similar to our parents.


Diana
Me and my boyfriend
Topic sentence
Me and my boyfriend like every different things.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in social-life.
Sub-TopicC1 My boyfriend likes telling when I am angry, Whereas … .
Sub-TopicC2 He can make me have fun a lot, but … .
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both like to eat same thing.
Sub-TopicD1 Contrast with your character – Example But I am very rational, ….
Sub-TopicD2 He likes to go a new place, whereas I prefer to go that I know.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are similar in liking to go out.


April
Me and my friend
Topic sentence
Me and my friend are very different in some things but we can be friends.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in personality.
Sub-TopicC1 I’m friendly, while my friend is quiet.
Sub-TopicC2 I’m study hard, while my friend isn’t interested in anything.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both have a similar thinking.
Sub-TopicD1 She is very confident while I’m not confident.
Sub-TopicD2 She likes to talk a telephone, but … .
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both like to help each other to do everything.


Jane
Me and my mother
Topic sentence
Me and my mother are very different in some habits.
Say What first sub-topic We are different in appearance because my mother is older than me.
Sub-TopicC1 My mother has light skin, but I have a dark skin.
Sub-TopicC2 My mother is fat; in contrast, I am a little chubby.
Sub-TopicC3 However, We both have a similar face.
Sub-TopicD1 My mother is a confident person but I am a shy and quit person.
Sub-TopicD2 She likes to stay at home; in contrast, I like to travel.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both like to talk with each other.


Hunter
Me and my cat
Topic sentence
I have 1 cat. It lives with us for long times. Me and my cat can be compared in many ways.
Say What first sub-topic We are in the Animal Kingdom, but we belong to different families. So we are different in appearance.
Sub-TopicC1 I have two legs but he has four legs.
Sub-TopicC2 While I can speak more than one language, he can “meow” only. (Just do Sub-topic 1)
Sub-TopicC3 He doesn’t have to go to school but I have to. (Just do Sub-topic 1)
Sub-TopicD1 A cat really enjoys eating that same as me.
Sub-TopicD2 He is lazy, the same as me.
Sub-TopicD3 I sleep so late at night as I am a hard sleeper, but he sleep all the time.


Iris
Me and my artist
Topic sentence
He can draw a lot of pictures, but I can’t draw.
Say What first sub-topic Me and my artist have different ideas.
Sub-TopicC1 He draw very beautiful picture, but I can’t draw good picture like him.
Sub-TopicC2 He has imagine while I don’t have.
Sub-TopicC3 However, we like drawing picture.
Sub-TopicD1 He is quite but I like funny.
Sub-TopicD2 He likes traveling while I don’t like traveling.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both like to learn a new things.


Candy
Me and Farang teen girl
Topic sentence
Me and a Farang teen girl are different in body, lifestyle and … .
Say What first sub-topic we are different in appearance.
Sub-TopicC1 A farang girl is growing fast, yet I’m growing up slowly.
Sub-TopicC2 Unlike a farang teen girl who has blond hair, I have dark hair.
Sub-TopicC3 However, we both have a slim body.
Sub-TopicD1 She looks beautiful, but I look just ordinary.(doesn’t match in D2 D3)
Sub-TopicD2 She can speak English very well while I’m still studying English.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we are both like to talk with many people.


Fay
Me and myself when I was child
Topic sentence
When I was child, I liked to play around the time, but now I grow up I love to do many activities that make me happy.
Say What first sub-topic we are different in appearance.
Sub-TopicC1 This time I can go to school while I was child, I can’t go to school by me (doesn’t match Sub-topic1)
Sub-TopicC2 Now I don’t like to play with a babies doll, but when I was young I liked to play with a babies doll.
Sub-TopicC3 Now I like to play games and when I was young too.


Pam
Me and sport star
Topic sentence
Like a sport star, I enjoy many kinds of sport, but we are different in many ways.
Say What first sub-topic we are different in way of life.
Sub-TopicC1 I enjoy when I watching sport, but a sport star enjoys playing a sport.
Sub-TopicC2 They are sport stars while I’m one of the people watching them.
Sub-TopicC3 However, we both like sport.
Sub-TopicD1 He is strong we but I’m weal
Sub-TopicD2 He enjoys every kind of sport, but I can’t play same sports.
Sub-TopicD3 However, we like to learn new things.

2552/08/07

งานที่เรียนวันที่ เจ็ด เดือนสิงหา ปีสองพันเก้า

มีไม่ทั้งหมด และเราก็จดลงมาให้แค่นี้ เพราะที่เหลือ อ.แกไม่แก้อ่ะ มันก็ผิดอยู่อย่างนั้นเราก็เลยเอามาลงแค่นี้

Hunter
Topic : Me and a ghost
Attention getter : No one really know if a ghost is real or not?
Topic sentence: I have a body but ghost don't have it. All it has is just energy. I can die in the future but a ghost can't, because it is already dead.


Stellavivi
Topic : Me and a businesswoman

Attention getter : everyone want to rich and successful.
/Or/
If you want to be a successful in everything , you should start today, because being successfel depends on yourself.
Topic sentence: I can be compared and contrasted with a businesswoman in term of ..., ... and ...


Melody
Topic : Me and a tour guide

Attention getter : Do you know that a tour guide takes us everywhere?

Topic sentence: I like to go everywhere and a tour guide can go with me everywhere. So, I and tour guide know everywhere.


Stella
Topic : Me and my mother
Attention getter : It is our mother who gives us a birth
Topic sentence: I'm different from my mother in many things such as personallity, hobby, and apperances.


April
Topic : Me and my brother

Attention getter : Do you have a brother?
/Or/
My brother is older than me and his ideas are better than me.

Topic sentence: my brother and I are different in many ways such as ....


Alex
Topic : Me and an artist

Attention getter : What is art?

Topic sentence: I can be compared and contrasted with an artist in the following ways: what we like to do in our free time, draw a picture, take a photo and ...... .


Jane
Topic : Me and a hotel reception
Attention getter : Did you ever receive a good service in a hotel?
/Or/
A hotel reception is a person who gentle and speak nicely but, am shy and quite. I don’t speak much.
Topic sentence: I am different from a hotel receptionist in many ways such as our personality, …. and ….. .


Stitch
Topic : Me and my father
Attention getter : Have you ever taken care of by a good man?
/Or/
My father is older than me, but he has a similar face to me.
Topic sentence: My father and I have a similar face, but we differ in appearance, … and … .


Iris
Topic : Me and a model
Attention getter : Everyone knows that a supermodel is tall and has a good body.
/Or/
Supermodel is very tall and beautiful, but they have work hard and take care themselves all the time.
Topic sentence: I am different from a supermodel in many ways such as appearance, work, and routine.