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Hunter
Topic : Sea level
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : If a sea is increasing, some big cites will be under water. If you neighborhood is flooded, where will you live?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Increasing sea level is cause by temperature rising. Temperature rising or global warming is caused by: deforestation, electronic waste and industry and modern life
April
Topic : Flood
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could you tell me where the flood come from?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, climate change is because people like cut a tree, burning forest and global warming.
Stella
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Nowadays air pollution has been increasing more and more
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Nowadays air pollution can effect people in vinous ways such as, allergic, cancer, and respiratory.
Jane
Topic : Water pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Water pollution has a lot of effects to everything and everyone.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now we have a lot of problems caused by pollution. There are many types of water pollution such as chemical, Microbiological and Oxygen – depleting substances.
Alex
Topic : Adaptation
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Do you know that ‘renewable energy’ will help prevent the climate change?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, many countries around the world use renewable energy sources: solar power, wind power and water power. These will have the effect of reversing climate change.
Diva
Topic : Climate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could the climate change in the future? The climate of the earth always has been changing, but now it is changing more quickly.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : The Climate change causes many problems and affects vegetation, species and humans.
Candy
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : What is the cause of air pollution?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air Pollution can caused by these problems: traffic jams, factories and …. .
Pam
Topic : Flooding
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Flooding is clauses by a significant and unexpected event, or as a result of another hazard.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Flooding can caused by creek due to heavy monsoonal rain, storm surge, or serer thunderstorm.
Stitch
Topic : Global Warming
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : The world is getting hotter and hotter because of global warming.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Global Warming can cause these problems: increased temperature, greenhouse effect and natural phenomena.
Iris
Topic : Air pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Higher average global temperatures mean that diseases, or their carriers, may be able to move to areas that were previously too cold for them to survive.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air pollution can be a caused by these factors: forest, smoke from lactones, and traffic jams.
Deena
Topic : Result of human health from dimate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Globally, there are likely to more flood , more drought, and more storms which will be accompanied by damage to our homes, flood and water supplies and impact on our general health.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : In the present, there are many results from Climate change, for example more floods, more droughts, and more storms.
Fay
Topic : Skin disease because use cosmetics is not standard.
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Now the weekend market sell imported cosmetics that are very cheap but they’re not standard. So they can have bad effects.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : If you use cosmetics that are not standard, your face will look very frightful and it can’t be maintained. (Write three effect).
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งานนี้เขียนกันในห้องเรียน...
Hunter
Topic : Sea level
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : If a sea is increasing, some big cites will be under water. If you neighborhood is flooded, where will you live?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Increasing sea level is cause by temperature rising. Temperature rising or global warming is caused by: deforestation, electronic waste and industry and modern life
April
Topic : Flood
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could you tell me where the flood come from?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, climate change is because people like cut a tree, burning forest and global warming.
Stella
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Nowadays air pollution has been increasing more and more
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Nowadays air pollution can effect people in vinous ways such as, allergic, cancer, and respiratory.
Jane
Topic : Water pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Water pollution has a lot of effects to everything and everyone.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now we have a lot of problems caused by pollution. There are many types of water pollution such as chemical, Microbiological and Oxygen – depleting substances.
Alex
Topic : Adaptation
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Do you know that ‘renewable energy’ will help prevent the climate change?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, many countries around the world use renewable energy sources: solar power, wind power and water power. These will have the effect of reversing climate change.
Diva
Topic : Climate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could the climate change in the future? The climate of the earth always has been changing, but now it is changing more quickly.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : The Climate change causes many problems and affects vegetation, species and humans.
Candy
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : What is the cause of air pollution?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air Pollution can caused by these problems: traffic jams, factories and …. .
Pam
Topic : Flooding
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Flooding is clauses by a significant and unexpected event, or as a result of another hazard.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Flooding can caused by creek due to heavy monsoonal rain, storm surge, or serer thunderstorm.
Stitch
Topic : Global Warming
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : The world is getting hotter and hotter because of global warming.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Global Warming can cause these problems: increased temperature, greenhouse effect and natural phenomena.
Iris
Topic : Air pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Higher average global temperatures mean that diseases, or their carriers, may be able to move to areas that were previously too cold for them to survive.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air pollution can be a caused by these factors: forest, smoke from lactones, and traffic jams.
Deena
Topic : Result of human health from dimate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Globally, there are likely to more flood , more drought, and more storms which will be accompanied by damage to our homes, flood and water supplies and impact on our general health.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : In the present, there are many results from Climate change, for example more floods, more droughts, and more storms.
Fay
Topic : Skin disease because use cosmetics is not standard.
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Now the weekend market sell imported cosmetics that are very cheap but they’re not standard. So they can have bad effects.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : If you use cosmetics that are not standard, your face will look very frightful and it can’t be maintained. (Write three effect).
04 09 09
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Example
Topic : Fruit
Give a sentence or two of background information : About 11,000 years ago, people started to plants fruit trees on farms. Nowadays , farmer are experimenting with new kind of fruits.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : My purpose is to help the reader choose the best fruit so I will sub-divide fruit as follows: sweet, salt and bland.
Sub-division one : Some fruit are sweet, such as the apple. It is round and either green, yellow and red.
Candy
Topic : Music
Give a sentence or two of background information : Music is part of everyone’s life, especially teenager. There are many kind of music such as, string, classic, jazz etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Music can be divided into Thai music, Native music, and International music.
Sub-division one : Thai music is one kind of music. When you listen to Thai music, it’s makes you feel good because Thai music sounds great, for example kamikaze.
London
Topic : Cartoon
Give a sentence or two of background information : Cartoon in this world are funny. Many people like cartoons such as Snoopy, Micky Mouse, Winny the Pooh, etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Cartoon can be divided into three kinds: funny, action, rate-R and Romantic.
Sub-division one : Thai music is one kind of music. Romantic is one kind of cartoon. When you read a romantic cartoon, you feel you want to love someone, for example ‘love celeb’.
Deena
Topic : Shopping places
Give a sentence or two of background information : In the present time, there are many shopping places, I believe that everyone like to shop in the shopping malls or small shops, etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : My purpose is to choose the best shopping places that are suitable for you land, you can walk in the shopping malls so long and have everything you want, so I will subdivide shopping mall places as follows: …..
Sub-division one : Extravagant Shopping places are Siam-Paragon. It is a large place, there are many things that you want, and lots of shops for your choices.
Melody
Topic : Beaches
Give a sentence or two of background information : Everyone wants good weather for relaxing and comfortable, so beaches are the best places.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Beaches can be divided into beaches where you can relax in the sand rocky beaches and sea. Beaches that are good for swimming (Andaman sea), Beaches for entertainment (Pattaya) and Beaches for relax and quiet (Ko Man Island).
Sub-division one : Beaches are good swimming. They have clear water and you can see fishes in the water. So you feel very close to nature and relaxed.
Jane
Topic : Gifts
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now people like to send gifts to each other. There are many kinds of gifts to send to other people.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Gifts can be divided into gifts for children, for teenager, and for aaults.
Sub-division one : The best gifts for children is toy, either a doll is for girls or a model train or sword for boys.
Diana
Topic : Nightclubs
Give a sentence or two of background information : A nightclub is a bar, where you can drink, dance, talking with your friend and make a new girlfriend or boyfriend.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Nightclubs can be divided into three kinds: karaoke, bar and dancing venue.
Sub-division one : In Santika has a karaoke, bar and boyband that can make you feel excited and fun.
Diva
Topic : Cosmetic surgery
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now many people want to do Cosmetic surgery to different parts of their body, such as nose, eyes, because they want to be more self-confident.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : The cosmetic surgery can be applied to the nose, eyes and chin.
Sub-division one : Surgery to the nose can make you more beautiful such as someone who has a big nose can change it to be smaller.
Iris
Topic : Friends
Give a sentence or two of background information : Friends are important for everyone because friend help you in everything and every time. If you don’t have friends, you can’t live in this world.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : When you want to know someone you should look at their friends can be sub-divided as follows: friends that habit, think, personalities.
Sub-division one : I can meet friends at the dormitory. The dormitory has a lot of rooms and a common room. If I come to the common room, I can meet a lot of friends.
Stitch
Topic : Transportation
Give a sentence or two of background information : Nowadays, transportation is more convenient for people that have to travel because there are many ways to travel.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Transportation can be divided into traveling in the air, on land, and on water.
Sub-division one : Traveling in the air is one kind of transportation. It can be a plane, a balloon, or a helicopter. And you can see a beautiful view, if you travel by this way of transportation.
April
Topic : Exercise
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now people are not healthy because they don’t have time to exercise. In the past, people were healthy because they had more time to exercise.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Exercise can be divided into benefit, sports for exercise and ages.
Sub-division one : Children should choose the best sports for them, such as swimming in the pool or walking around a park.
Pam
Topic : Movies
Give a sentence or two of background information : A movies has an actor or actress, a story, and a place.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : There is many kinds of movies, but I’m going to write about these three ideas: for example: Action, Horror, Comedy, Love story, etc.
Sub-division one : One kind of movies that I am interested in is action because when I watch a movie I feel excited by the action scenes, such as ‘…give an elample…’
Alex
Topic : Books
Give a sentence or two of background information : There are many kinds of book in this world, because people write for many purposes, such as: advice, entertainment, and other things.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : There are three kinds of book that I’d like to describe to read: advice, entertainment, novel, cartoon, reference, photography and art, biography, historical and other things.
Sub-division one : One kind of book that I like is novel; The Last Fantasy is about adventure and fantasy.
Example
Topic : Fruit
Give a sentence or two of background information : About 11,000 years ago, people started to plants fruit trees on farms. Nowadays , farmer are experimenting with new kind of fruits.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : My purpose is to help the reader choose the best fruit so I will sub-divide fruit as follows: sweet, salt and bland.
Sub-division one : Some fruit are sweet, such as the apple. It is round and either green, yellow and red.
Candy
Topic : Music
Give a sentence or two of background information : Music is part of everyone’s life, especially teenager. There are many kind of music such as, string, classic, jazz etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Music can be divided into Thai music, Native music, and International music.
Sub-division one : Thai music is one kind of music. When you listen to Thai music, it’s makes you feel good because Thai music sounds great, for example kamikaze.
London
Topic : Cartoon
Give a sentence or two of background information : Cartoon in this world are funny. Many people like cartoons such as Snoopy, Micky Mouse, Winny the Pooh, etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Cartoon can be divided into three kinds: funny, action, rate-R and Romantic.
Sub-division one : Thai music is one kind of music. Romantic is one kind of cartoon. When you read a romantic cartoon, you feel you want to love someone, for example ‘love celeb’.
Deena
Topic : Shopping places
Give a sentence or two of background information : In the present time, there are many shopping places, I believe that everyone like to shop in the shopping malls or small shops, etc.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : My purpose is to choose the best shopping places that are suitable for you land, you can walk in the shopping malls so long and have everything you want, so I will subdivide shopping mall places as follows: …..
Sub-division one : Extravagant Shopping places are Siam-Paragon. It is a large place, there are many things that you want, and lots of shops for your choices.
Melody
Topic : Beaches
Give a sentence or two of background information : Everyone wants good weather for relaxing and comfortable, so beaches are the best places.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Beaches can be divided into beaches where you can relax in the sand rocky beaches and sea. Beaches that are good for swimming (Andaman sea), Beaches for entertainment (Pattaya) and Beaches for relax and quiet (Ko Man Island).
Sub-division one : Beaches are good swimming. They have clear water and you can see fishes in the water. So you feel very close to nature and relaxed.
Jane
Topic : Gifts
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now people like to send gifts to each other. There are many kinds of gifts to send to other people.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Gifts can be divided into gifts for children, for teenager, and for aaults.
Sub-division one : The best gifts for children is toy, either a doll is for girls or a model train or sword for boys.
Diana
Topic : Nightclubs
Give a sentence or two of background information : A nightclub is a bar, where you can drink, dance, talking with your friend and make a new girlfriend or boyfriend.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Nightclubs can be divided into three kinds: karaoke, bar and dancing venue.
Sub-division one : In Santika has a karaoke, bar and boyband that can make you feel excited and fun.
Diva
Topic : Cosmetic surgery
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now many people want to do Cosmetic surgery to different parts of their body, such as nose, eyes, because they want to be more self-confident.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : The cosmetic surgery can be applied to the nose, eyes and chin.
Sub-division one : Surgery to the nose can make you more beautiful such as someone who has a big nose can change it to be smaller.
Iris
Topic : Friends
Give a sentence or two of background information : Friends are important for everyone because friend help you in everything and every time. If you don’t have friends, you can’t live in this world.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : When you want to know someone you should look at their friends can be sub-divided as follows: friends that habit, think, personalities.
Sub-division one : I can meet friends at the dormitory. The dormitory has a lot of rooms and a common room. If I come to the common room, I can meet a lot of friends.
Stitch
Topic : Transportation
Give a sentence or two of background information : Nowadays, transportation is more convenient for people that have to travel because there are many ways to travel.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Transportation can be divided into traveling in the air, on land, and on water.
Sub-division one : Traveling in the air is one kind of transportation. It can be a plane, a balloon, or a helicopter. And you can see a beautiful view, if you travel by this way of transportation.
April
Topic : Exercise
Give a sentence or two of background information : Now people are not healthy because they don’t have time to exercise. In the past, people were healthy because they had more time to exercise.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : Exercise can be divided into benefit, sports for exercise and ages.
Sub-division one : Children should choose the best sports for them, such as swimming in the pool or walking around a park.
Pam
Topic : Movies
Give a sentence or two of background information : A movies has an actor or actress, a story, and a place.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : There is many kinds of movies, but I’m going to write about these three ideas: for example: Action, Horror, Comedy, Love story, etc.
Sub-division one : One kind of movies that I am interested in is action because when I watch a movie I feel excited by the action scenes, such as ‘…give an elample…’
Alex
Topic : Books
Give a sentence or two of background information : There are many kinds of book in this world, because people write for many purposes, such as: advice, entertainment, and other things.
Think of 3 of sub-divisions and write a topic sentence : There are three kinds of book that I’d like to describe to read: advice, entertainment, novel, cartoon, reference, photography and art, biography, historical and other things.
Sub-division one : One kind of book that I like is novel; The Last Fantasy is about adventure and fantasy.
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