Eassay class 09-12-09 (6)

Essay Writing in English 09-12-09

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Diva (How to I breathe)
Review the main idea of the song: A man regrets and wants apologize to a woman for pushing her away from his life.
Why do you like this song?
* Because I like the rhythm of this song. (Why do you like it?)
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* This song has a slow rhythm.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are romance and covey a little sadness.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* He go along on the road and meets a woman.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* He hope that his girlfriend will forget him.
What other song is the song like?
* Right now na na – this song is similar to ‘How do I breath’ because the man can’t alive when he’s will out his girlfriend.
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* He will continue to be singer and very popular.

April (You are not alone)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about one person telling that you are not alone in the world.
Why do you like this song?
* I like this song because whenever I feel lonely. I listen to this song and makes me happy.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* This song has a slow rhythm.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* It’s deep.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* In this video have a singer and his wife are on the stage.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* He’s hopeful.
What other song is the song like?
* Season change (Thai song).
What other singer is the singer like?
* Elvis, because he has his dancing style.


Jane (Love letter)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about his good memories with his lover and he wants to tell her that he loves her.
Why do you like this song?
* I like this song because when I listen this song, I feel very impressed. Even thought they are in. I don’t understanding lyrics been use Japanese.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* This song has a slow rhythm.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* It’s a romantic song.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* Because this song doesn’t has MV. I imagine that the boy is staying with a girl and felling that he love her.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* No matter what happen, he will love her forever and stay by her side.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Neung nai mai kee kon’ (Thai song).
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* Next year, he will release a new album.


Deena (Heal the world)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about his dream, that he want to make the world a better place, for everyone in the world and himself. For some things could be better than in the present.
Why do you like this song?
*I like this song because it has a good meaning and when I listen this one, I feel happy and love this world.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* This song is slowly rhythm. This song slow from the beginning to the end.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* This song gives me hope, I think when someone listens to this song, they will feel the same as me.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* In this video, there are many orphans. They give hope and are happy. When we give them opportunity to perform on video.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* The end of this song makes me feel hopeful.
What other song is the song like?
* We are the world
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* He wants to support and donate a lot of money for orphans.


Alex (You’re my everything)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about one man who meets one girl. And that makes him know about endless love.
Why do you like this song?
* I like this song because when I listen to this song, it has a feeling hope. It makes me think that when I fall in love, everything will be bright and colorful.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* This song has a slow rhythm. The sound is very soft.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* This song has 3 feelings, the first is sadness, the second is hope about love, and the last is just happy.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* In this video. The man is driving a car alone. Then when he comes to the girl’s house, he runs to her and hugs her.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* In the end, he is happy. He will love her forever.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘When your gone’ this song has the same meaning as ‘You’re my everything’.
What other singer is the singer like?
* ‘Westlife’, this band sings the same kind of song as they do.


Stella (Sometime)
Review the main idea of the song: She needs time and wants a man to understand her before falling in love with her.
Why do you like this song?
* Because the song has a good meaning.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* It’s quite even.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* Some of the lyrics are confusing.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* She stays on the beach without her lover.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* She hope that her lover will trust in her and understand her.
What bad thing do people say about the singer and her music?
* Now, she is a little bit crazy.
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* She will release her new singer.



Candy (If I Were A Boy)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about a woman imagining that she were a boy; she would not make a girl sad and would be a better man.
Why do you like this song?
* Because this song has a good meaning and the singer has a powerful voice.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* It’s slow.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are a little angry.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* Bayonne see the boys and wonders if they know the girl’s feeling when she had a broken heart.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* She hope that the boys could understand, how it feels to love a girl.
What other singer is the singer like?
* ‘beyounce’ this singer is familiar with ‘Madonar’ because she has power sound and perfect body.
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* She will have big concerts around the world and release her new singer.


Iris (From the Bottom of My Broken Heart)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about the woman who got broken heart from a man because the man has a new girlfriend.
Why do you like this song?
* Because this song sounds good and is easy listing.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* It’s slow.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are filled with sadness.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* Britney sits on the swing and thinks about her boyfriend.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* She’s so sad and crying.
What other singer is the singer like?
* ‘Britney’, this singer is similar to ‘Ta Ta Young’ because she is so sexy and sound good.
What bad things do people say about the singer and her music?
* She is too sexy and has a lot off boyfriends.


Melody (With you)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about the man who falling in love with his girlfriend and he doesn’t need anything else.
Why do you like this song?
* Because this song has a good meaning and song sounds fun. (Why do you like the meaning of this song?)
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* The rhythm is midiem.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are romantic.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* Chris brown stands waiting for the woman. (Does anything happen?)
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* He’s happy because the woman loves him too.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘You belong with me’ this song is similar ‘With you’ because the woman is falling in love with her friend.
What bad things do people say about the singer and her music?
* He is smart and handsome.


Owa
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about the man who wants to find someone who can take his heart and show him what is love.
Why do you like this song?
* Because the melody of this song is very tuneful and this song has a good meaning. (Why?)
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* It’s slow.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are deep and sweet-sounding.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* A singer sings a song and the other members play music.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* He wants someone who can love him and show him what love is.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Sleeping child’ this song is release in MLTR’s album and MLTR likes to sing the deep song.
What do you think she is going to do in the future?
* The group will have concerts and release the new album.


Pam (Out of reach)
Review the main idea of the song: She is confused and her heart’s bruised by a man who didn’t love really love her. She hopes that time she’ll forget him.
Why do you like this song?
* Because the song shows deep feeling of someone who has a broken heart.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* The rhythm is medium.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are so confused and deep.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* She never had his heart. (What happen in the video?)
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* She’s so hopeful.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Without you’ this song is similar.
What other singer is the singer like?
* ‘Shelby lynne lyrics ’ this singer is familiar with Gabrielle. Because she is a pop singer and sings the same style songs.


Harmony (I’m not a girl, not yet a woman)
Review the main idea of the song: This song is about a teenage who is trying to find herself.
Why do you like this song?
* Because I’m a teenager and this song sounds nice.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* The rhythm is slow.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* They are confusing.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* Britney stands on the mountain.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* She’s still confused.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Lucky’, this song is similar to ‘I’m not a girl, not yet a woman’. Because she sang it when she was a teenager.
What bad things do people say about the singer and her music?
* She used to take drugs.


Diana (Someday I’ll)
Review the main idea of the song: She need some love from him, but she doesn’t think that she’s good enough yet.
Why do you like this song?
* Because this song have a good meaning. When I listen to this song I feel relaxed and want to sing.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* The rhythm is very fast.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* It’s just relaxing and happy.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* The music video has many people playing movie. Some are acting, playing drums and singing.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* Everyone is very happy in this song because everyone has fun playing this song.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Aab n jaw’ because the meaning is the same as someday I’ll. I think it is almost the same because it is about falling love and the broken heart.
What other singer is the singer like?
* Potato is the famous band in Thailand because their songs are very funny.


Stella vivi (I’m yours)
Review the main idea of the song: He want to tell his love to his lover.
Why do you like this song?
* Because this song has a good rhythm and chill out style. When I listen to this song. I feel relax.
Can you describe the rhythm? Is it fast or slow?
* The rhythm is slow and relax.
Can you describe the rhythm? Are they romantic, deep, just fun, filled with anger, filled with sadness, just happy?
* It’s just happy.
Can you describe what happens in the video?
* The music video shows the man and woman doing the activities such as waking up, working. But the man never says ‘love’ to his lover.
How does the song end? Does it have a happy, hopeful, sad or bitter ending?
* He is very happy because he has the occasion to tell his love.
What other song is the song like?
* ‘Khon sam kan’ like ‘I’m yours’ song because the meaning is about someone who has a lover, but don’t have the confidence to say it.
What other singer is the singer like?
* “Chinnawut” is similar to Jason Marz. Because the singer’s style is chill-out and his lyres have a good moaning.

Essay (4-5)

Essay Writing in English
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Harmony
Topic: Ron; the fireman
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: On that day, I had off and felt really comfortable. Then I met my friend and talked to her. I felt very happy.
Conflict/victim (1st ): While we were walking back home, I found that her house was on fire. I told her to call the fire station and the ambulance. I also told her that ‘You have to calm down, your parents will be safe trust me’.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: While they were walking back home, he found that her house was on fire. He told her to call the fire station and the ambulance. He also told her that ‘she have to calm down, as her parents will be safe trust him’.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I went inside her house. I went her mother from the kitchen, and then I went inside again to help her father that was upstairs. They were safe.
Hero (3rd ): He went inside her house. He went her mother from the kitchen, and then he went inside again to help her father that was upstairs. They were safe.


Stella
Topic: Sam; The race car driver
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling:One day I had to compete in the race, I felt very excited and wanted to win.
Conflict/victim (1st ):I was glad that I was going to win this race, when suddenly I heard a car crash. I stopped. My car immediately and looked back. I felt that I had to help him no matter if I won or not.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: He was glad that He was going to win this race, when suddenly he heard a car crash. He stopped his car immediately and looked back. He felt that he had to help that man no matter if he won or not.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I helped him out of the car, he looked so terrible. While we were running out of that area, the car explored. Both of us were safe.
Hero (3rd ): He helped that man out of the car, that man looked so terrible. While they were running out of that area, the car explored. Both of us were safe.


Molina
Topic: ; Truck driver
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I felt good because I liked to help my friend when they had a problem.
Conflict/victim (1st ):When I saw the car had crashed into the trees. I felt frightened. Then, I hurried up to help them.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: When he saw the car had crashed into the trees. He felt frightened. Then, he hurried up to help them.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): After, they were safe. They went to my office and thanked me. I felt happy when I saw them again.
Hero (3rd ): After, they were safe, they went to his office and thanked him. He felt happy when he saw them again.


Diana
Topic:; flight attendant
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: One day, when he piloted flight to London, he helped people on the plane. I think he will became a hero soon.
Conflict/victim (1st ): While I was sitting on a place suddenly it felt down into the ocean. I was very scared. If I were a super-man I would help everyone on a plane. Until everyone felt well.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: While he was sitting on a place suddenly it felt down into the ocean. He was very scared. If he were a super-man he would help everyone on a plane. Until everyone felt well.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): After that I will calling to a plane attendant to help us and keep everyone out side of a plane. Because many people dead on a plane.
Hero (3rd ): He talked to hurt people how dose you feel right now. I am feel OK. He can help and asking hurt people. Then I think I call him ‘HERO’ at this time.


Iris
Topic: Boonperm; the policeman
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: One day, I met a woman who was crying and saw a thief who stole jewelry. I felt very excited and I had to save life.
Conflict/victim (1st ): When I met a crowd of people around a woman who was crying at a jewelry shop, I felt amazed. The thief stole jewelry and took the girl to be hostage. I felt shock.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: When he met a crowd of people around a woman who was crying at a jewelry shop, he felt amazed. The thief stole jewelry and took the girl to be hostage. He felt shock.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I talked to the thief and I said that ‘What do you want?’. The thief replied ‘I want money’. While everybody was excited. I ran to catch the thief and I safe hostage from the thief. I was happy and I felt relieve.
Hero (3rd ): He talked to the thief and he said that ‘What do you want?’. The thief replied ‘I want money’. While everybody was excited. He ran to catch the thief and He safe hostage from the thief. He was happy and he felt relieve.


Candy
Topic: ; pizza delivery boy
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: One day, I found the two car bomes and the girl was trying to escape from this event. I felt very excited and tried to help her.
Conflict/victim (1st ): After that, an ambulance came to receive her, I felt worried for the young woman’s life because I saw her get very hurt. I asked her ‘Are you OK?’. She said ‘No, help me please’.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: After that, an ambulance came to receive her, He felt worried for the young woman’s life because He saw her get very hurt. He asked her ‘Are you OK?’. She said ‘No, help me please’.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I told doctor ‘I have to go now’ please take care her. After that, I could send a pizza on time. And I heard that she was safe. After that I receive 100,000 Bath and then everyone called me ‘HERO’.
Hero (3rd ): He told the doctor ‘He have to go now’ please take care her. After that, He could send a pizza on time. And He heard that she was safe. After that he receive 100,000 Bath and then everyone called him ‘HERO’.


Hunter
Topic:; animal attack
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was very surprised and wondered at seeing a girl. Because in my empire women were less fewer than men. I wondered and want to know where she come from.
Conflict/victim (1st ): Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: ไม่มาเลยไมได้ทำ
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): Hero (3rd ): ไม่มาเลยไมได้ทำ


Melody
Topic: Micky; the construction worker
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I felt to proud because I could help somebody from bad situation.
Conflict/victim (1st ): When I was coming back to the house. I heard the sound of something near by ‘Help me, please’. I ran to find where the sound coming from. I saw a big stone falling from the old building and I saw a little girl who stayed down stairs in the old building. Immediately I ran to help her. I held her arm tightly.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: When he was coming back to the house. He heard the sound of something near by ‘Help me, please’. He ran to find where the sound was coming from. He saw a big stone falling from the old building and he saw a little girl who stayed down stairs in the old building. Immediately he ran to help her. He held her arm tightly.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ):After that I help her of arm recently. Then I ran out from that. I told her ‘don’t worry yourself’ . I felt to proud, because I could help her from bad situation.
Hero (3rd ): After that he help her of arm recently. Then he ran out from that. He told her ‘don’t worry yourself’ . He felt to proud, because he could help her from bad situation.


Alex
Topic: Audy; the magician
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was very excited when I went to show around the world. It made me feel pressure when I went to practice my magic.
Conflict/victim (1st ): I saw the girl, that she was running. I thought that something was going to happen. And then I saw one man following the girl with a gun in his hand. And he was going to shot the girl. I decided to follow them. I felt very excited and wanted to help her.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: He saw the girl, that she was running. He thought that something was going to happen. And then he saw one man following the girl with a gun in his hand. That man was going to shot the girl. The magician decided to follow them. He felt very excited and wanted to help her.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I saw the girl in danger. I would use my magic to help her escape. That man was very surprised. I felt tried after using magic, but I could help her from that man. I felt very happy.
Hero (3rd ): The magician saw the girl in danger. He would use my magic to rescue her. After that thief was very surprised. He felt tried after using magic, but he could help that girl from the thief. He felt very happy.


Pam
Topic: the fisherman
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was very scared by the bite of the shark and frightened by this situation.
Conflict/victim (1st ): I was very happy and thought if I were a super heroine. I would assist the injured.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense:She felt cared and frighten to met a shark.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): After that I killed a shark but my arm got hurt and I was safe her from the shark. // I helped her by a pulling a rope and use the lance to fight a shark.
Hero (3rd ):After that He killed a shark but his arm got hurt and he had saved her from the shark.


Diva
Topic: sailor
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was very happy when I was journey in the ocean. Then, I was take a nap because I was tried.
Conflict/victim (1st ): At the same time, I felt frightened and happy when I brought a whale on to the boat.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: He felt frightened and happy when he brought a whale on to the boat.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I was sent an injured Whale to hospital and took care of it everyday. Then I bought it back to the ocean.
Hero (3rd ): He sent the injured Whale to hospital and took care of it everyday. Then he bought it back to the ocean.


Deena
Topic: Valentine; the mountaineer
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was proud of myself but, when I was in that event, I couldn’t forget and thought of every way to helping everyone.
Conflict/victim (1st ): When I am in the situation, I feel very scared but I always find a way to help everyone. When anyone has many problems. On the mountain, I can help them.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: she was very frighten when. She fallen on the mountain.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I brought many items of equipment in my security bag to help her but took too long. Because she ran out of energy for down from the mountain but I bring her from the mountain successfully.
Hero (3rd ):She brought many items of equipment in her security bag to help that girl but took too long. Because she ran out of energy for down from the mountain but she bring that girl from the mountain successfully.


April
Topic: Jack; the soldier
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was happy when I joined the army because I wanted to help people.
Conflict/victim (1st ): I feel very excited and scared, but I want to help a kid from the fire.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: He feel very exciting and scary, but he want to help kid from the fire.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): Although I going to died but I felt proud myself when I helped my country.
Hero (3rd ): Although he was going to die but he felt proud of himself when he helped his country.


Jane
Topic: Michal; the explorer
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: I was excited because I was going to explore the jungle.
Conflict/victim (1st ): I felt very terrible and lonely because my friends had died. They had died of jungle fever.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: He felt very terrible and lonely because his friends had died. They had died of jungle fever.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I am so happy because I can complete my mission. Although I have to sacrifice myself. I am glad that everyone would survive.
Hero (3rd ): He am so happy because he can complete his mission. Although He had to sacrifice himself. If he was glad that everyone would survive.


Owa
Topic:; the airplane pilot
Build-up (Before the accident) Telling what the hero thinking and feeling: It was very dangerous. I had to help anyone. It was very hard to control. Finally, I could save everyone’s life. I felt very fearful and excited. I was very glad that I could save everyone life.
Conflict/victim (1st ): When another airplane crashed the fail of the airplane that I was controlling. My airplane is tail caught fire and fell from the sky. I tried to control it. I felt very fearful and excited.
Rewrite in (3rd )past tense: When another airplane crashed the tail of the airplane that he was controlling. His airplane’s tail caught fire and fell from the sky. He tried to controlling it. He felt very fearful and excited.
Hero Action & Ending (1st ): I tried to control the airplane for saved everyone’s life. I could do it. I was very glad that I could save everyone’s life. Then they called me “hero”
Hero (3rd ): He tried to control the airplane for saved everyone’s life. He could do it. He was very glad that he could save everyone’s life. Then they called him “hero”

conversation

บทความนี้น่ะ

Oil, Dee & Boat: Hi! Aiw, how are you?

Aiw: I am pretty good, what about you?

Dee: I am OK, not too bad.

Oil: Do you know Ken Teeradat.

Boat: Yes, he is very famous and popular.

Dee: Oh! Yes, he is very well-known in Thailand.

Oil: I just saw a movie that he performs.

Boat: I just saw too.

Aiw: What is the name of the movie?

Oil: Sky train love story.

Aiw: I have ever heard that, what about character of Ken Teeradat.

Dee: In this movie, Ken is an engineer of BTS sky train. He looks handsome and kindness.

Oil: Yes, I think so. He looks polite and quite person.

Boat: Yes, but sometime he is funny and joke.

Aiw: He looks so good, I would to have a boyfriend like him.

Boat: Really?

Aiw: Yes.

Dee: I feel very jealous actress.

Aiw: What about character of actress?

Oil: She is very clumsy.

Boat: But sometime I think this of girl is so cute.

Dee: I would like her in this story because sometime she looks beautiful.

Aiw: how is she look like?

Oil: She’s tall, cute and light skin. If you have a free time, you should to watch this movie.

Aiw: OK.

Boat: Aiw, Do you know Thai actor or actress?

Aiw: I don’t know so much.

Oil: Why?

Aiw: Because, I don’t watch Thai movie.

Dee: Do you watch a movie?

Aiw: I do but, I like to watch Korea series.

Boat: Really? Who do you like?

Aiw: Kim Hyun Joong and Yuri.

Oil: What is the movie that they performed?

Aiw: Kim Hyun Joong performs in Boy Over Flower. Yuri performs in Snowqueen, Hong Gil Dong, Once Friday.

Dee: How they look like?

Aiw: Kim Hyun Joong are tall, high nose, handsome. Yuri are tall, slim, light skin and cute.

Oil: How about their personality?

Aiw: Everybody know that Kim Hyun Joong is “sexy boy” in Korea. He’s gentle man. Yuri is lovely. Hey, which singer that you like most?

Dee: I like Boy Peachmaker.

Oil: I like Mario.

Boat: I like Tor+ Sarsit.

Aiw: Which song do you like?

Dee: I like “Karn Bian Prang”.

Oil: I like “How do I breathe”.

Boat: I like “Luk Ter”. Ohhh! How about you, Aiw. Which song do you like?

Aiw: I like “lovely you” (Tongbangshin-gi).

Oil: I heard that Tongbangshin-gi is very famous. I don’t know them before. Can you tell me about them?

Aiw: Tongbangshin-gi has five people. There are Jae Joong, Joun Soo, U-Know, Chang Min and U-Chon. They have own style. They are famous in many countries. They very friendly. I like them very much.

Boat, Dee & Oil: Woww…!

Oil: I will try to find their song on the internet.

Boat: Oh! I have their song. If you want it, I will send it for you by E-mail.

Oil: OK, thanks.

Dee: Hey! Guy, Do you ever been to Korea?

Aiw: No, I’ve never been there before, but I want to go.

Oil: No too, but I know Boat have gone to Korea.

Boat: Yes, I have been there before.

Aiw: Where did you go?

Boat: Nami Island, Samsung Everland, Dong dae mun market, Myeongdong market, Itaewon market and National Museum

Oil: How about the weather?

Boat: In the general weather is very nice, In summer the weather is about 40 degree up, But In Winter, it has snow and very snow.

Dee: How about Korea?

Boat: 90% of Korean is do surgery. I don’t like their personality. I like Thai people more than them.

Aiw: Why do you don’t like them. I think they good, because Korean men is Romantic and love their family.

Boat: When they have a child. Their Child is very offensive. Parent used to increase their knowledge about technology to catch up their child.

Oil: Really? That’s too bad.

Dee: Yeah, that’s too bad. It very different from Thailand.

Boat: Let’s talk about, how different about culture between Thai and Korea.

Dee: Thai people are very polite and kind. We help with each other when we have problem.

Aiw: Korea people are nationalism. Most people like to use Korea product.

Boat: I think ever countries have a good side and a bad side. We should keep the good culture.

Oil: Yeah, you right.

Dee: Hey! It’s time to go now. We have class, don’t you remember?

Oil: I already forgot it.

Aiw: Yeah, me too.

Boat: Let’s go. I want to get in class on time.

Eassay class 11-11-09 (3.2)

Essay Writing in English
งานบนกระดาน ที่เขียนกันนะครับ11-11-09 (3.2)

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April
Your hero: Soldier – shoot out
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Jack is a good soldier and always help people.
Background info: Later Jack became to hero because he helped a baby from fire War II


Deena
Your hero: mountaineer – fall
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Valentine is a mountaineer, she is very kind and help everyone who fell from the mountain.
Background info: After that Valentine became a hero, everyone who fell from the mountain knows her, because she could help one child who is child of president.


Diva
Your hero: sailor – sea battle
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Meth is a sailor who loves to journey around the ocean.
Background info: Then Meth became to hero because he helped a whale sorrier from an attack hunters.


Jane
Your hero: Explorer - fall
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Micheal is a
Background info: At last, Micheal became to hero because he found the lost city.


Alex
Your hero: escapologist – shot with gun
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Audy is a magician, he always performs every night.
Background info: Later Audy became to hero because he helped a girl escape from the murderer.


Pam
Your hero: Fisherman – shark attack
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Tom’s father is a fisherman and he always catches fish.
Background info: So Tom became to a great hero because he helped traveler from a shark attack.


Hunter
Your hero: ….. - animal attack
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Yahir is a khon of Mongolia. Everyday when he finishes at night, he goes to the steppe to shot animals.
Background info: Later Yahir became to hero because, one day while he was doing his hobby at night, he saw a girl who was being attacked by a big bear and then he helped her.


Stella
Your hero: race can driver – crushed
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Sam is a famous race card riving
Background info: Sam became to hero because he saved another race car driver at the racing track.


Harmony
Your hero: Fireman - fire
Write 1 or 2 sentences: I know one of the fireman named Ron. He always worked fighting the fire, which is very hot and dangerous.
Background info: Later Ron became to hero because he saved my parent from the free.


Molina
Your hero: Truck driver - crash
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Megan is a truck driver. He is kind – hearted and having working.
Background info: Later Megan became to hero because he helped a child from danger. (What danger?)


Owa
Your hero: Airplane pilot – airplane crash
Write 1 or 2 sentences: no one knows when you go to another country by plane what will happen.
Background info: Shinwan became to hero because he saved everyone’s life on the plane.


Iris
Your hero: Policeman – shoot out
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Boonperm is a policeman who works very hard.
Background info: Later Boonperm became to hero because he saved people from a thief.


Candy
Your hero: Pizza delivery boy – being robbed
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Winny is a Pizza delivery boy. He is the fastest delivery boy in the town.
Background info: Later Winny became to hero because he saved a women from danger. (What kind of danger?)


Melody
Your hero: Construction worker – builder
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Mickey is a Construction worker.
Background info: Later Mickey became to hero because while builders were building a stone fell from up stairs, he could help somebody and save his life.


Dear
Your hero: Zookeeper – animal attack
Write 1 or 2 sentences: Satoshi worked at the best zoo.
Background info: Later Satoshi became to hero because he helped some children who were being attack by an animal.

Eassay class 11-11-09 (3.1)

Essay Writing in English

งานบนกระดาน ที่เขียนกันนะครับ
11-11-09 (3.1)

Hunter
Topic: Dragon
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Dragon say: “I am warrior, I have to eat much because fighting with enemies use a lot of energy.”
Reported Speech: He said that he was a warrior and he had to eat so much because fighting with enemies use a lot of energy.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Dragon say: “I’m sorry. Eating very much because my behavior. Although there aren’t any war in 2009. I continue eating.”
Reported Speech: He told that to eating very much because his behavior. Although there wasn’t any war in 2009. I continued eating.”


Harmony
Topic: Prince
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Fairy say: “You don’t have any knowledge, so why are you sleeping again?”
Reported Speech: She blamed the prince that he didn’t have any knowledge, so why he sleeping again.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Demon say: “You have to accept my condition.”
Reported Speech: He said that the prince had to accept my condition.


Stella
Topic: Witch
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Devil say: “how many wishes do you have for yourself?”
Reported Speech: he asked the witch how many wishes did she have for herself.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: The witch say: “Oh my god! It is so disgusting.”
Reported Speech: She exclaimed that it was so disgusting.


Jane
Topic: elf
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Fairy say: “Can you help me find my diamond?”
Reported Speech: she asked elf to help her to find her diamond.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Goblin say: “I won’t let them fine the diamond.”
Reported Speech: he said that he wouldn’t let them find the diamond.


Molina
Topic: Cat
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Candy say: “I don’t like to do anything.”
Reported Speech: She said that she didn’t like to do anything.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Cat say: “Why am I getting sick and thin?”
Reported Speech: She asked why she was getting sick and thin.


Owa
Topic: Devil
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Devil say: “I want to be a strongest of evil.”
Reported Speech: He said that he wanted to be the strongest of evil.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Elf say: “Whenever necessary I want to help everybody.”
Reported Speech: She said that she wanted to help everybody whenever necessary.


Iris
Topic: Troll
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Nanny say: “I’m a very big, fat and ugly women and I live alone in a cave.”
Reported Speech: She said that she was a very big, fat and ugly women and she lived alone in cave.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Nanny say: “It’s impossible for me to tease people because I’m a good person.”
Reported Speech: She said that it was impossible for her to tease people because she was a good person.


Pam
Topic: Princess
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Princess say: “I’m a princess in the Golden Town.”
Reported Speech: She said that she was a princess in the Golden Town.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Princess say: “I’m a queen and so beautiful.”
Reported Speech: She said that she was a queen and she so beautiful.


Candy
Topic: Princess
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Princess say: “I want to go to see a strange - looking plant in the forest.”
Reported Speech: she said that she wanted to go to see a strange - looking plant in the forest.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Princess say: “Wow! It’s so beautiful.”
Reported Speech: She exclaimed that it was so beautiful.


Alex
Topic: Pig
Paragraph2 Dialog1: Pig say: “I like to eat cake and sweets. Emm… it’s delicious.”
Reported Speech: He told a dog that he likes to eat cake and sweets and said that it was delicious.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Dog say: “You are very lazy. You should to study or work rather than eat all the time.”
Reported Speech: He said to a pig was very lazy. He should have studied or worked rather than eat all the time.


Diva
Topic: Chicken
Paragraph2 Dialog1: The old man say: “Every day we always pick eggs from this chicken.”
Reported Speech: they said that every day they always picked eggs from this chicken.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: The old man say: “Oh! This is our eggs.”
Reported Speech: They said this was their eggs.


Deena
Topic: Bear
Paragraph2 Dialog1: The king say “I want a beautiful bears for making bags.”
Reported Speech: The king said that he wanted a beautiful bear for making bags.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Princess say: “I will disguise a beautiful bear to be ugly.”
Reported Speech: She said that she would disguise a beautiful bear to be ugly.


April
Topic: Dog
Paragraph2 Dialog1: A pig say: “When will you come back here?”
Reported Speech: A pig asked a dog when would he come back here.
Paragraph2 Dialog2: Cat say “Today, I will tease it again.”
Reported Speech: Cat said that that day she would tease it again.

Term 2 Essay Writing in English

Essay Writing in English

28-10-09 (1)

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ส่วนเนื้อหาอื่นๆ ก็คงไม่ได้ลงไว้ --

Iris
Main Character: troll
Character two (Bad): witch
Character three (Friend): angel
Title: The troll who become a slave.
Statement personal interest: The troll is big and ugly and lives in a cave. Everybody is afraid of him.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a troll have a bad behavior, witch will take curse him become a slave forever.

Stella
Main Character: witch
Character two (Bad): demon
Character three (Friend): cat
Title: The witch who became katooy.
Statement personal interest: The witch uses a lot of magic and behaves body.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a witch is good , she will not wish herself to be a katooy.


Jane
Main Character: elf
Character two (Bad): goblin
Character three (Friend): fairy
Title: The elf who became popular.
Statement personal interest: An elf lives in a forest and gorgeous.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If an elf doesn’t have confidence, he will lose his chary.


Harmony
Main Character: prince
Character two (Bad): demon
Character three (Friend): fairy, princess
Title: The prince who became educated.
Statement personal interest: Many people know that princes are handsome and clever, but this prince is stupid.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a prince doesn’t become educated, a demon will take his soul.


Pam
Main Character: frog
Character two (Bad): devil
Character three (Friend): bird
Title: The frog who became prince.
Statement personal interest: Everyone knows the frog who became prince.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a frog can speak to other people, who will be come back to the palace. Or A frog can’t be famous unless they have a magic skill.


Candy
Main Character: princess
Character two (Bad): witch
Character three (Friend): giant
Title: The princess who became a slave.
Statement personal interest: A princess is a king’s daughter and lives in the royal palace.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a princess have the most beautiful in the world, witch will take curse her become a slave.


Hunter
Main Character: dragon
Character two (Bad): pig
Character three (Friend): cat
Title: The dragon who became fat.
Statement personal interest: A dragon is a Chinese creature. It is a symbol of good luck and fortune.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a dragon get too thin, he will be weak and unable to defend himself.


Molina
Main Character: cat
Character two (Bad): pig
Character three (Friend): dog
Title: The cat who became lazy.
Statement personal interest: The cat eats too much and doesn’t like to do anything.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a cat eat too much and doesn’t like to do everything, then she will get fat. xxxx If a cat works too hard………


Melody
Main Character: angel
Character two (Bad): devil
Character three (Friend): elf
Title: The angel who became a slave.
Statement personal interest: The angel has good habits. She likes help everybody.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If the angel helps everybody, the devil will catch her to make her a slave.


Diana
Main Character: rabbit
Character two (Bad): wolf
Character three (Friend): dog
Title: The rabbit who became lonely.
Statement personal interest: The rabbit is a small furry animal that run very fast.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a rabbit makes friends with everyone, she will be in danger.


Alex
Main Character: pig
Character two (Bad): wolf
Character three (Friend): dog
Title: The pig who became good at English.
Statement personal interest: A pig is very lazy and likes to eat all time.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a pig isn’t good in English, it will be killed by the wolf.


Dear
Main Character: wolf
Character two (Bad): tiger
Character three (Friend): turtle
Title: The wolf who became vegetarian.
Statement personal interest: A wolf usually hunts and eats smaller animals.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a wolf doesn’t like vegetables, he will be killed by a tiger.


Deena
Main Character: bear
Character two (Bad): king
Character three (Friend): princess
Title: The bear who became rich.
Statement personal interest: the king who unkind, he want a bag made of wool’s bear.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If the king catch a beautiful bear. The bear will be die. The princess will be in danger.


Diva
Main Character: chicken
Character two (Bad): wolf
Character three (Friend): fairy
Title: The chicken who became popular.
Statement personal interest: The chicken can fly and give the eggs for humans.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a chicken doesn’t have eggs for food, the human doesn’t want it.


April
Main Character: dog
Character two (Bad): cat
Character three (Friend): pig
Title: The dog who became high-class.
Statement personal interest: can be friend when you lonely.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If the dog is low class, the human doesn’t want it.


Owa
Main Character: devil
Character two (Bad): demon
Character three (Friend): elf
Title: The devil who became peaceful.
Statement personal interest: The devil has bad habits and is an enemy of the demon.
Thesis statement (...Main idea): If a Devil is not peaceful, he will be destroyed by his enemies.

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งานนี้เขียนกันในห้องเรียน...


Hunter
Topic : Sea level
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : If a sea is increasing, some big cites will be under water. If you neighborhood is flooded, where will you live?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Increasing sea level is cause by temperature rising. Temperature rising or global warming is caused by: deforestation, electronic waste and industry and modern life


April
Topic : Flood
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could you tell me where the flood come from?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, climate change is because people like cut a tree, burning forest and global warming.


Stella
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Nowadays air pollution has been increasing more and more
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Nowadays air pollution can effect people in vinous ways such as, allergic, cancer, and respiratory.


Jane
Topic : Water pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Water pollution has a lot of effects to everything and everyone.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now we have a lot of problems caused by pollution. There are many types of water pollution such as chemical, Microbiological and Oxygen – depleting substances.


Alex
Topic : Adaptation
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Do you know that ‘renewable energy’ will help prevent the climate change?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Now, many countries around the world use renewable energy sources: solar power, wind power and water power. These will have the effect of reversing climate change.


Diva
Topic : Climate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Could the climate change in the future? The climate of the earth always has been changing, but now it is changing more quickly.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : The Climate change causes many problems and affects vegetation, species and humans.


Candy
Topic : Air Pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : What is the cause of air pollution?
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air Pollution can caused by these problems: traffic jams, factories and …. .


Pam
Topic : Flooding
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Flooding is clauses by a significant and unexpected event, or as a result of another hazard.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Flooding can caused by creek due to heavy monsoonal rain, storm surge, or serer thunderstorm.


Stitch
Topic : Global Warming
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : The world is getting hotter and hotter because of global warming.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Global Warming can cause these problems: increased temperature, greenhouse effect and natural phenomena.


Iris
Topic : Air pollution
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Higher average global temperatures mean that diseases, or their carriers, may be able to move to areas that were previously too cold for them to survive.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : Air pollution can be a caused by these factors: forest, smoke from lactones, and traffic jams.


Deena
Topic : Result of human health from dimate change
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Globally, there are likely to more flood , more drought, and more storms which will be accompanied by damage to our homes, flood and water supplies and impact on our general health.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : In the present, there are many results from Climate change, for example more floods, more droughts, and more storms.


Fay
Topic : Skin disease because use cosmetics is not standard.
Attention getter surprising statistic/ fact from your article : Now the weekend market sell imported cosmetics that are very cheap but they’re not standard. So they can have bad effects.
Write a topic sentence introducing three cause or three effects : If you use cosmetics that are not standard, your face will look very frightful and it can’t be maintained. (Write three effect).